My writing for this week

This week me and my class have been writing a review of something that we did in the holidays.
Here it is.

1 Conical Hill Rd

Hanmer Springs 7334

16.10.18

Dear Heritage

My name is Isabella I’m nine years old and I stayed at your lodge the first weekend of the school holidays with my `mom and dad. It was a weekend to celebrate my mom’s B-day.

I liked my room and my bed and the place is quiet and calm. The view of the hills out of our windows was fantastic.

The garden was nice and big but with the pool being closed it would be nice to have maybe a playground for kids my age.

My bed was very soft and comfortable however my pillows were floppy I think if you got harder ones more people would want to stay at your lodge and you would make more money.

The bathroom was very big which I liked but it was not very good cause it did not have any lock on the door so it was not very private.

I hope you take my advice and improve your lodge I really hope I get to come back in the summer when the pool is open and I noticed that you were painting the pool I hope it will look flash and cool. I hope you have lots of fun and people this summer.

From Isabella

My HERO work

This week I have been learning about being an Open-Minded Explorer.  My task was to write a blog post about a time that I have been an Open-Minded Explorer.

One time that I was an open-minded explorer was when I didn't finish my stuff that I had to do yesterday because I was talking to my friend's and not doing my work like I was told to do. I felt nervous. I helped myself by not trying to do that today. I helped myself by sitting away from my friends and making good choices.