I hope you like it.
here it is.
Friday, 23 November 2018
My writing for this week
Today we have finshed our made up stories mine is about Stella the strawberry
4 comments:
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1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Bella.
ReplyDeleteI'm Gracie from Yaldhurst In Rimu class.
I really enjoyed your post! But maybe next time you write a story do a different background or different text colour so its easier to read, but apart from that great post.
Kind Regards , Gracie
Hi Grace,
DeleteThank you for commenting on my blog and thanks for the tip on my stroy I will do that for next time.
From Bella.
wow bella I love the detail on your story I love that stella has two cute babies maybe you could have a different background because it is hard to see the words luckily I have glasses
ReplyDeleteyours sincerely Shjon
ki-ore bella,
ReplyDeletei like the title and the storberys. one kweshchen when did you make the book.
from Takira