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Monday 12 November 2018

cooper's blogging mistakes!

On Monday I looked at cooper's blog most of his stuff privte.there was stuff like his password for one of the games that he plays online.He also told us were he gose in the weekend.He shared hi birthday.


Here is a link to cooper's blog for you to check out!

2 comments:

  1. Hi my name is Bridget from yaldhurst model school I like the way you have spotted someone eleses mistakes hopefuly you commented on his or her blog Good job.

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  2. Hi Bella,
    It's good that you've been able to spot mistakes on people's blogs, because that makes it easier to improve your own work.

    Have you commented on Cooper's blog to let him know what mistakes he's made?

    Next time, use capital letters and punctuation.
    Thanks,
    Ariana, Yaldhurst Model School.

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