What a brilliant story! I love how you have capital letters not only at the start of your sentence, but also on all the names of the animals and characters - ka pai! You have awesome illustrations at the beginning, so next time keep them going with even more throughout your book!
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Hi Bella,
ReplyDeleteWhat a brilliant story! I love how you have capital letters not only at the start of your sentence, but also on all the names of the animals and characters - ka pai! You have awesome illustrations at the beginning, so next time keep them going with even more throughout your book!
From Miss W